I wish the day would come,
so I could see your face.
Stab you in the eye,
and burn down your fucking place,
Where you lay your head,
because I wish you were dead.
I hate you so much.
All I can think is red.
The color of your blood,
pouring out of your head.
The way you used to touch me,
and then hit my mom.
God I fucking hate you,
for all the shit you've done wrong.
You used to think you were cool,
and sit back and drink your beer.
God I fucking hate you.
Your a fucking queer.
Then you molested my cousin,
and you thought that shit was funny.
I wish I could see you again,
I'd cut your dick off you dummy.
And while you have it in your hands,
I'd make you spit on that shit.
I'd make you shove it up your ass,
and wiggle it around a little bit.
How do you like it now,
that the shit is turned around?
Yes I got a gun,
so lay the fuck down.
Put your hands to your side,
and kiss your ass good bye.
Bang bang now your dead,
and I did it with pride!!
Now that your dead ,
I feel much better.
Every time I think about it,
I get a little wetter.
Author notes
This is fo my mothers ex boyfriend who I lived with for four painful years of my life. I am sorry that it is a little voulger, but it made me feel so much better when I wrote it.
A contest entry
- Come on Lovely Poets! Let Your Hatred Come Out With Cruel Passion by Leaving Today.
465 points, ended August 19, 2008, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
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1450 points, ended October 16, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Fantastic. I love this....THe anger is incredible, the pain you portray is magnificent. I am so proud of you for being able to write this. I wish sometimes that i could have done exactly that. Such great structure and word choice to this poem. I am very impressed
thanks for entering my contest and i am so sorry for all your pain.
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Emotionally packed full of dark enrgy Very well done
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powerful indeed! similar to what I was looking for!
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What a very powerful display of righteous anger! I can only wish that i could let myself get that angry! It takes courage and guts.Way to get back.
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