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Killed By Amore

In a once lovely world,
You entered my life.
Piercing the serenity
With the force of a knife.
At first I thought you great,
Not someone I could hate,
But oh how I was wrong.
I hated you before long.
You harassed me constantly.
You ruined me.
You made my life that much worse,
Than how fucked up I thought it could be.
I cried when you wouldn't stop,
I begged and started to plead.
You didn't care, you kept going
As I started to hurt and bleed.
Finally you ended your raid,
Far too late now.
You had a change of heart to apologize,
I don't even know how.
You ask for forgiveness.
I ignore you.
You speak of your own suicide.
I implore you.
You're starting to crack,
You don't know what to do.
Come here to me little boy,
Let me destroy you.
I want to take the blade from your hand,
And drive it into you myself.
I want you swinging from this noose
I've hung for you from my shelf.
I want your breath cut short,
I want your tongue cut off,
I want your manhood chopped,
I want the world to scoff.
I want them to see,
I want them to mock you.
I want them to feel hate
The same way I do.
I propose a toast,
Here's to your bloody demise.
So raise your glass in front of me,
While death clouds your eyes.
You will die, my dear.
Of that I am sure.
You will die from my work,
Killed by amore.

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finally finished it!

A contest entry

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  • xXdeadXinsideXx
    August 6, 2008
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    it was good keep up the good work ^-^


    • LittleMissFaith
      August 6, 2008
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      lol thanks. you just reminded me i needed to finish this poem! lol thanks so much. it's done now. i hope lol.


  • For You. I Cry.
    July 30, 2008
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    lmfao
    its about colton!

    i think

    GOOD LUCKS!

    • LittleMissFaith
      July 30, 2008
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      yes yes it is. and i have writer's block. grrawr.
      and i love how im fully aware that reserved is spelled wrong and im too lazy to fix it =/