Sitting,
all old school in your glass bottle,
your cap tempts and beckons my opener.
With a pop my belt buckle obliges,
releasing the five senses of summer.
[Who knew that one bottle could contain all 5?]
Gripping underneath the label,
where the hand grooves imply,
pulling the top to my lips,
where I feel Pepsi's summer bubbles
itch my nose.
Author notes
My name is Salt Walker
A contest entry
- Ode to Pepsi!!! by Tamaska Forsaken.
925 points, ended August 2, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice! I too, would like to see a bottle of pepsi in an old-school bottle.
Thanks for entering!
Tamaska
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Merry meet,
A wonderful poem about the joys of Pepsi. Do they still put Pepsi in bottles? I haven't seen one of those in years. Good luck in the contest.
Amythest
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um i just got back from a europe trip where all the soda was in glass bottles.(thats where I got the idea) and some places in maine still sell it that way. thanks for reading, i'm glad you enjoyed!
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This is a cute poem i like how you tell about the pepsi and having all five of the summer senses, i love how you have brought into the sitting all old school in the glass bottle, and i like how the summer bubbles itch your nose, have you ever tried the summer mix pepsi? anyways good luck in the contest and keep up the writing, ~Amy
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No I haven't, but it sounds good. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
Salt
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aww, such satisfaction! i loved it!
though i will always perfet left align,
it's really up to the writer!
peace to all ~flight
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thanks dearie!!! i'm glad you liked it, but to me odes always belong in the center. but as you said its all up to the writer! thanks for reading and enjoying! love muches!
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