summer sunset
a family discussion
ends eye-to-eye
Author notes
An ongoing talk that gets nowhere, each of us airing our fears, but nothing gets unresolved. We do understand where the other is coming from, but... We see eye-to-eye like where the sun is at sundown, but can't make the other rest assured.
A contest entry
- Teach me how to write a haiku by notorious.
2246 points, ended August 10, 2008, 44 entries
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Comments
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I can understand this so well. I too have similar problems at times with making my voice heard and my meaning known...great ku honey.
~mandie~
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LoL!!!
"An ongoing talk that gets nowhere"
In your AN. Wow, I think lots of people have talks like this with their moms.
Or maybe just me? 
Loved the haiku. Not much else needs to be said! Correct use of hyphens in that last line always gets kudos from me...heheh
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