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Take it, Leave it

Take it,
Just take it,
You need it,
You really do,
Don't break it,
Seriously,
That'll be bad,
And I won't be happy,
Actually,
Leave it.

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  • righteousme
    July 31, 2008

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    i love this piece at the end, as an afterthought, oh no actually, leave it... it was a great write... thank you so much for your time and talent...


  • Ana-Andrea
    July 28, 2008

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    Ha ha! I enjoy the dry sense of humor in this. I've heard this kind of monologue before, so I can just picture it.... Cute.