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[ Feeling helpless, useless, and lost ]

Feeling helpless, useless, and lost
 All the times I could have saved myself
  Life seems to prohibit me from finding joy
   Love is just another simple happy fairytale
    I wanted to find something I could hold onto
     Never could I have imagined this future for me
      Going down forever until someone comes to save me

Author notes

This is an acrostic poem and it's not much but I wanted to try something new, I hope you like it.

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  • XxESPNCHICKxX
    September 1, 2008

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    This is good although it could have had more but I mean I liked it amazing use of words in such a short poem...thank you for entering it and good luck and sorry that this contest took so long!