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Where we once did lie

There were corpses sleeping
Where we once did lie
Beside the sailors
Beneath the sky

Their bodies were stoic
Rigid and flat
No warmth could touch them
A beauty turned black

He looked at me
As I stared at them
Fascinated by their tragedy
He dropped my hand

We adjusted their skirts
Covered their thighs
Anger now lived here
Where two lovers did die


There were corpses sleeping
Where we once did lie
Beside the sailors
Beneath the sky

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