The summer sun
blows colours in to the steady wind
that travels across the sea
to paint the flowers
with dripping scents
that fill the soil with love
soaking our hearts with nature's beauty.
A contest entry
- summer love :) by Marilyn..
600 points, ended August 4, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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awwwwww this is splendous
love the breezy feel to it...so pretty
good luck in the contest and take care
Stephanie ♥ x
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OH!!!! this is really beautiful!!! and reminds me of things!! lol.. never mind about that though!
I really loved this hun.. It's short and sweet yet full of alot of emotion!!! bravo!! I wish you the best of luck hun!
Angel
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