rainbows shimmer, hues of murder.
Close the shutters
Night time's over.
Do we even know each other?
You supplied me
"electrify me."
Almost sober,
take another.
Mass confusion,
almost lose it
Paint a picture
fix a mixture
melt and drink a lighting fixture
trails of lightning
tremble frightening
muse and booze scream high is hightening
illusioned fears
drive hammered tears
and turn your gears
Another year.
you're turning 25
[can you even find your life?]
the dance across the page
claws into your minimum wage
was it yours to begin with?
take another trip.
lies in lists
and scars on wrists
clench your fighting fists
rainbows shimmer, hues of murder.
Close the shutters
Night time's over.
Do we even know each other?
Author notes
make common sense common.
I don't know where this came from, it's probably not what you were looking for.
the name's wonderbandalice
A contest entry
- Perspectives of the Brilliantly Insane by SoulfulBubbles.
450 points, ended August 14, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What be your thoughts?
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I love it. It's like a song; I can imagine somebody singing it during a war movie or something. LOVELINESS~
And yes, I have logged in. I figured there wouldn't be enough space on dA for just one comment. : -
ooo i this fascinating and i like the flow and originality in it..
and how you moved around the page
thank you so much for entering!
it almost sounds like the first option, and also the 2nd
but besides not being sure about what option it is
its what i was hoping for
^-^
hey could you put your user name in ur notes so i could read your other pieces?
- Kas K bubbles
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thank you so much!
I'm very glad you liked it, I wasn't sure if you would.
My username should be in the notes now.
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