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Kissing goodbye

Kissing goodbye, like a butterfly I fly away
I left you here, but I’ll give you my heart and one day..
I was watching you for years
Saw you cryin’ blood
I didn’t understood
I gave you my heart
For ever and for all time
Girl, you’re mine
And i’ll never let you go
No matter what people say
I think about you all day
I think about you when you’re not here, when I can’t hear you, when I can’t see you..
But sometimes I can’t explain my feelings and don’t know what to do
But never forget; I’m always there for you, no matter what’s wrong
I’m just a simple boy who loves a special girl
Well, in his eyes she’s special
Maybe she thinks he’s crazy, but that’s true
I’m crazy, but only of you
And it’s hard to explain, you can’t explain your heart
Nobody’s so smart
Nobody knows really what to say
I can say I love you, and that’s okay
But it’s too simple
Too simple for such an unsimple feeling
Inside i’m bleeding
I never brake your heart
If I do, waste me and kill me
I don’t deserve better then
That’s fine
But know now, not this time
I will never brake it
And no shit
You’re fucking everything to me
Can’t you see?
Never forget
When you’re depressed or feeling sad
Look inside you heart
I’ll stay here with you.. forever and ever till death do us part
These are my feelings, now I hope you understand
Say you love me, and give me your hand..
<3

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I'd give anything to have her back -x-

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  • xXbleedingscarsXx
    September 17

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    the raw emotions scream at me...i feel for your loss and i hope you do what you can to not live in your sadness....though it is hard...loved ur write and the rhyming you did with it... *thumbsup*

    ~x~shadow~x~@

  • awwww!! i love it love it love it!!!
    damn. heartfelt poem...
    makin me cry..uhh..
    great write!!


  • lovemedeath
    January 20
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    aww!! i loved!! it!!!!


  • JustFallingApart
    August 1, 2008
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    i like this...nice write


  • SarahEatsAirplane
    July 31, 2008

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    aww. this is so raw and sad darling. :\
    but its really nicely written, i like the little rhyming scheme.

    thank you for the comment, it made me so happy. i actually smiled for real. thank you.


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