Instability consumes
closed minds as
devouring hearts flee,
~~~
Yet pupils scar
and sight dissolves
to eidetic memory.
~
Horizons broaden when
ideology is re-drafted;
faded from translucent
Shark to miniscule fish,
swimming hopelessly
in cobalt waters:
{{Solitarily free}}
Author notes
Shallow Becomes The Deep
A contest entry
- Quote PIF by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
575 points, ended August 4, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A wonderful poem so crafted in wonderful words
Love the lines..
Shark to miniscule fish,
swimming hopelessly
in cobalt waters:
{{Solitarily free}}
Thank you for your entry and best wishes
Julie
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a great take on the promt with some great imagery
Yet pupils scar and sight dissolves to eidetic memory.good luck in the contest
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