Hand in hand with smile
virtue's constant trials
lifted to meet the sky
rift among the tides
scurry and swim with life,
to dream through out the night,
awaking to destined path,
thrilled by choices, grabbed -
today I curtsy to hope,
profess loyalty to god,
to stand proud in the arms -
of faith and all I have.
Author notes
Joined AP on August 6, 2006
Ladylavender
A contest entry
- Victory by vacygnet.
600 points, ended August 4, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Favorites Only Please! Thank You! by poetryality.
1500 points, ended September 1, 2008, 46 entries
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There is surely "victory" in these words. I am sure you are more but this is a great place to be. Your poem stirs the spirit and shows how far you have come in writing so much with so few words. Very uplifting and assured. Thank you for this entry dear heart and I wish you the best in this challenge and all your endeavors in life.
Always ♥
Renee
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Thank you, dear Renee!
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wow. very nice. lovely read. enjoyed. well done.
blu
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Thank you beautiful blu.
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Well done. There is a new level of depth to your work recently and I find wonderful surprises each time I read a poem of yours.
Thanks for the inspiration.
Garrison
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Your Welcome. Thank you...for stopping by!
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This is awesome. It shouts triumph!
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beautiful
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Thank you Celadia!
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Thank you Meme!
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very inspiring!
I LOVE THIS WRITE MY FRIEND! Beautiful sentiments throughout the entire piece. lots of luck to you in the contest.
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All that I am. Like this sis. 'Tis an excellent way to start the day. Wirte on.
Dez
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