my jealous heart whispers the secrets
of alluring devotion to a secret life
of bare pleasures
a look created to lift a meandering
sinful being to an accepted created
reality
Author notes
picture prompt (click to view)
http://allpoetry.com/images/ext/Image/56/519.jpg
30 words
Option #1
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Semi Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended July 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW. I really enjoyed reading this poem. your take on the prompt is wonderful. I really love the last stanza. excellent job on both the poem & the prompt.
good luck
kat
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lovely work friend. you have a great depth to you.
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Wonderful
Great expression or the prompt. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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These lines amaze me how true you say: ...to an accepted created reality. Mix the virtual being to reality to coexist. Reality supersedes the desires. Today I have no heart. my love is poetry free writes. lol
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