A learning mistake slowly unfolds,
as destiny lays down this forsaken lesson.
Love is forever I was told,
Head hung ashamed, grasping my Smith & Wesson.
Somethings cannot be undone....
Author notes
Picture from PhotoBucket
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Semi Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended July 31, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow
great work and congrats on gold xx
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Thank you very much
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Wow the power of the gun and the bullet shot!
Tragic and beautifully sad
a fantastic write
Best wishes
Julie
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Thanx Julie, a great way to come back....gold he he...
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ick! this was really powerful.. You did a wonderful job with this prompt.. The flow and imagery was just so vivid, and the emotion behind this is really amazing.. You did such a wonderful job.. I wish you the best of luck..
Angel
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POWERFUL
& very strong poem that you have written. the last line says it all. you are so very right, somethings can't be undone.. very dark, and so powerful your words are.
excellent take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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I read this before the picture showed up.... whew! What a strong voice in this one! Hopeing it just from the picture, not what you are feeling!
This is fantastic!!
Best of luck in this contest!
Ek is lief vir jou altyd
Nyetta
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