I see life pass by
Sitting at the edge
Inside claustrophobic success
I’ve reached the skies
Breathless sighs gasp
Time dangles in loneliness
Enjoying company of depression
--still empty hands
Author notes
Success is often bitter sweet!
Picture Credit - Photobucket
Option# 3
In a list
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Semi Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended July 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a nice descriptive write for the prompt .. good luck in the contest . .
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you know these poems of yours that start making me think are making my head hurt, there are too many,lol, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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sometimes the price for success is high, I do believe. your poem is Outstanding. I really love it. this poem is something that I'm sure that a lot of people can relate to..
excellent take on the prompt..
can you please place the option # in your AN.
good luck
kat
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What a great job you did on this one! And the picture, is OMG!!! Priceless! I love this one!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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Oh so sad.. But...
What a view out of that picture window! Wow! Wouldn't that be cool to view every day? Up there one could date angels. ew!
A well written but sad sounding poem. That view is deffinitly a must share. Best wishes in the contest.
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Wow. The working struggle of achievement versus outcome.....stunning fantastic....
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