wings flutter,
buoyant bliss,
kiss of a breeze,
the joys of summer,
delicately dancing
delightful exultation,
winging weaving weightless wonder,
gentle beauty carried on a breath,
colourful caresses fluttering by.
Author notes
Option one.
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Semi Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended July 31, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is a beautiful poem that you have here. I love the imagery its wonderfully vivid. I got a calm feeling while reading this, and I felt relaxed for the first time today. *sigh*
wonderful poem. Thank you for this poem.
good luck
kat
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Love the take. Well done. Great use of words....
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ah are we not all those with wings in the social ways, well okay maybe not, you might be like me and never leave the flat, my social ways are here and now
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