Fuchsia dreams cannot contain,
stay locked away
from freeing atmospheres.
infinity of formations
for feet to twirl upon,
keys within reach
Waiting for hearts
desires to grasp
Unlock;
Run free…
Author notes
option three
A contest entry
- 10/30/30 Semi Quickie by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended July 31, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was marvelously penned
i loved your ending
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Free to escape
a wonderful poem full of thoughts and emotions
best wishes
Julie
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Love the feeling of freedom in this sis! Unlocking and just running free! Yayyy... lovely take on that pic!
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I liked it.
"keys within reach
Waiting for hearts"
I have to ask...why is 'waiting' capitalized, seemingly out of nowhere?
Apart from that, I liked this, especially "Fuchsia dreams cannot contain" (I think that's some sly alliteration, and dreams being colored is cool--plus, brings to mind some crap I wrote).
"infinity of formations"
NICE. The word 'infinity' is freaking sexy.
Good luck
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he its not supossed to be capitalized, so thanks darl
that would be my pregnant tired brain not noticing lol
Hehe yes i love the word infinity
Cind
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this is an amazing write and the power of your words are just stunning and captivating with such deep thought. why did i enter
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Aww thanx sis..and you enter cuause you
just as much as I do hehe...maybe more 
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"infinity of formations for feet to twirl upon" like the many layers of your words for the mind to dance around.... Beautifully done... Sure have missed you lately... Welcome back
Ken
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Thanks Ken, its good to be back
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the opening line of your poem, sets the atmosphere for the rest of it. Outstanding job with the prompt.. I do so love this picture, another favorite ones of mine. I love lines 4 & 5 so very much..
I think your muse came back to life.
good luck
kat
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Thanks darl
there're my favs two hehehe
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Fuchsia dreams...those two words made me think of so many things; they were so warm and exotic.
Yes, I think it kicked back into gear honey
The very best of luck in the contest.
Love always
Mum 
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hehehe, mmm exotic i like that description of it hehe
Thanks Mum
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lol you'll get there Cuz, haven't been dormant for too long
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I hope so, im not feeling very inspired, but hope I do
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