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Going Down

I held you in my heart
falling deep into despair
my lifepreserver of hope.

In a list

A contest entry

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  • MortalPhoenix
    August 7, 2008
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    This paints a very nice image.
    Thanks for entering my contest!


  • Wolflover
    August 7, 2008

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    I like this a lot!
    Sorry it took so long to reply I have been in the hospital so I haven't been able to get on. But this is vey nicly writen!