Grim results, As the sun loses to the moon.
Her eyes, silver as the lunar glow
Shoot open as she'll be hunting soon.
Victims they wait in the streets, un known.
Breaking free, from her leather restraints
She runs for the door, anticipation on high
No slayer will stop her tonight,no saints
For her hunger is great,someone's gonna die.
(TxT)
[The need is burning,scorching inside.
The creature within,Has won the fight.
There is no doubt about it,
Some one's going to lose their life.
Their fight will be futile,There is no escape.]
Once she's got her sight on you.
Nothing will save you from her fangs.
Digging them in deep, penetrating your flesh.
Necrophiliacs have no ground,She's got to have it fresh.
Blood lust, makes it so very difficult
To even think of pulling away.
Your crimson elixir is so very bitter sweet
Sustanance to sleep, another day.
(TxT)
Tonight blood caresses the carpet tight
The poor thing put up a good fight
Yet tomorrow they'll say
"It was just her time"
She died with honor,
not once begged for her life.
The tears she cried,
Were for those to which she couldn't say good-bye.
If only she wouldn't have strayed from the light.
Little Dear, put up a good fight
Tangled with in a blood lust escape,
An Innocent Child lost her life.
With vampyre tears upon her blood drenched skin.
Cursing the moment she favored
Not too long before,
When her leather restraints
went lax for her blood lust escape
Author notes
Well, I wrote this with my band mate, Toxic True. What is boxed in, is her amazing part. =] ^.^ If you like this, you should definitly check out some of her stuff!!!
K. Thanx.
In a list
A contest entry
- Supernatural by Mrs. Serial Killa.
600 points, ended July 29, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fantasy plus options!! by Lorien.
572 points, ended August 25, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Looking for Swans. [A Vampire Contest] by LoneFairrie.
1200 points, ended August 6, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Happy Part Of Darkness by Abstract Image.
450 points, ended September 10, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Bite Me?
Comments
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I see you have won a few trophies with this piece; not that I am surprised. Great write, you two. Congrats on the trophies won already, and I wish you luck with other contests to come that you enter.
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Thanks
I'm glad you liked it. <3
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Sweet
I love vampire poems. I've loved them even more since i started reading the Twilight Series so I have a good feeling about your poem. Good Luck. -
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Thank you
I love Vampyre poems so very much myself and it means alot that my own continue to captivate people.
Also glad to hear you're enjoying the Twilight series.=]
Thank you again.
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Ooo. You guys definitely write well together and I'm envious. This was a great poem, of course, and you both should be very proud.
Write together more often!! -
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Thank you. haha.
We are. mhm.
^^ we dooooooo
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That is very cool. Great take on teh way a vampire would hunt. I love it. Very true.
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Wow
Thank you for your comment.
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Great stuff!!!
Had me captivated throughout...
Have written a few Vampyre ones myself & always love to see other people's perception of the genre...
Well penned, Well versed, Well done!!!
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Vampyres
Are absolutley amazing. It's hard not to feel them and write an amazing piece to follow up that amazing feeling. =]
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i liked this one. you penned your imagery and your emotions very well.
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Thank you.
I'm glad you liked it.
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p.s i think i know who wrote this I guess Poetic Obscenity?
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&& Oh,
But of course. hehehe. ^.^
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I like this truely a very well put together poem
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Glad
You liked it.
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Very nicel;y written, i enjoyed every line. Nice idea behind the poem. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Thank you
Glad you liked it.
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this is amazing honey, i love this,
your both amazing poets and this is very clearly seen here, i love this with all my heart,
all my love , your amazing,
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You've definitly written far better.
Happy you've enjoyed this.
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yeah the stories definitely different
I enjoy reading poetry that has a somewhat different message to it, something that's not the same thing.
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Different
Is what i do. Thank you.
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Wonderfulllllll I loved this alot. My favorite part was when you said "Breaking free, from her leather restraints
She runs for the door, anticipation on high
No slayer will stop her tonight,no saints
For her hunger is great,someone's gonna die." Wow i am jealous of you :]
love,
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Aww. Dun be jealous of me, You're an AMAZING writer. Yessss.
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This is one of the best you've written, which is saying something! The words are mesmerising, umbilical chord of magnificence.I love the line "As the sun loses to the moon." It really set the tone.
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Thank You,
I've just been on a roll lately.
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