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Love and disagree?

We sit here,eyes to eyes, words unspoken soon said..
The smile you give me paints me red with love
Your hugs I receive are full of meaning and comforting to troubles
Your kisses electrify my body, giving my bones and more chills

With all this said unspokenly, something remains to be said.
So I speak these words, "You're beautiful."
"I am not, you're crazy." was your response
I tilt my head aside, smile, and say "You're beautiful to me."

You give me a crazy look, so I go on..
"You're beautiful to me in many more ways than one...your smile, hug, kisses, personality, jokes, laugh, dance, hair, face, body, eyes, EVERYTHING!
Everything about you is beautiful to me, it's true."

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I love you, Allyson.

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  • Together forever
    September 29, 2008

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    this is amazing!!! sooo sweet...so prefect!!
    i just love it sooo much!! its just amazing or mmazing i should say!!!


  • Sealight
    July 30, 2008
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  • Nickey Mouse
    July 28, 2008
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    FINALY! A HAPPY POEM! lol.
    I thought it was very nice and heartfelt.
    Nice job.