Scarlet ripples excrete flames
as tears cascade from memories
passed we try to forget .
when each tide ebbs and flows
the floods ooze flushing through
the shadows that were once there.
But now as the memories have passed
the warm amber hues discharge a
beautiful calming flow of growth.
Author notes
" Crimson tides bleed " by reptile lady
A contest entry
- Quote PIF by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
575 points, ended August 4, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A wonderful write
Imagery hand in hand along with a heartfelt message.
And, the hope of a lovely happy future
Thank you for your entry and best wishes
Julie
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very well expressed ...good luck
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Beautiful
A true work of art. Readind aloud I get a sense of calming in my voice and it feel right, leaving me fulfilled and satisfied. Thank you, Boog
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this is really good,
i like it alot its beautiful.
and so is the background,
all my love,
kitty xx -
awww this is so wonderful, a lovely write and good luck in the contest
take care, Stephanie ♥
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very nice write, great vocabulary used with amazing imagery! Best of luck in the contest,
Michael
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great take on the prompt
butiful
Judie x
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Wonderful
Terrific creation for the prompt. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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