Everyone healing time is different only God aboves knows
Did we as human tell God how to make his creation
There is a message of hope
Many have healed from having commas there many good books that have been wrote
Sometimes death is a form of healing,when our bodies our to broke to go on
I was a teenager survival of a head trauma
It changed my life what I did good, now I can do what I use to do
It been a blessing I learn what I could do with a little effort
What I cherish the most is the ones who give me hope
I feel hope is the best medicine around
I have wrote many of my poems around my experiences
We are given no guarantees in life
Maybe it a lesson to cherish what we have
All we have is this moment nothing more
Cherish life the hardest test is in the time of sorrow
My hope and prayers our with you
A contest entry
- I dont know what to say anymore... by Bloody Wonder.
450 points, ended August 19, 2008, 6 entries
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this was really good i enjoyed it:3
thanks for enteringbut i didnt quite get this part ¨when our bodies our to broke to go on¨.. if you could message me and explain or fix it if it was an error? thnak you :3
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when I went though my head injury the doctor told my mother my body was broken beyond human repair in the 1980 doctors lost many patients who had head trauma because they did not have the knowledge they have now doctors admit they still do not know enough about brain traumas how they effect the body in the long term the old view was the physical damage was healed you were magically all better now they are discovering when the body goes though one or more traumas or even other physical issues it effects our body in many different ways i have i am up to nine different issues physically and couple of mental issues from my old injures. i had one really bad concussion several minor concussions and a double brain trauma which efforts three areas of my brain. i had cancer and precancer they found out my body makes tumors. I have had my same vertebrae broke four times. i have nerve damage in a sicatice nerve that goes from top of my skull to the bottom of my foot. I get restless body syndrome which is like restless leg it effects the whole body chronic pain and another issue they can not figure out yet. It taken me from 18 to 45 to figure this out I have other issues that I can not even spell. it been a long hard road. sometimes it hard for me to put into words. i feel ashamed that i am so different from normal word. my family did not handle the new changes for i was not the same person, one side of my brain draws straight other side can not match the other side so i had to change how i draw for years i did not write i wrote like a three year old. i do not know why i am telling you this for i do not tell very many people. it taken years for the doctors to listen to me. I had injury cause Attention Deficit issues i see other people my age have nice home and cars i had to go on social security to afford my meds that run from two to three thousand dollars per month this is just some of the issues i guess i feel like a failure it taken me twenty years to write so so it was my dream to be an artist and writer.
i hope this explains it i will try to word it better
thank you for your feedback
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You are right honey! Hope and love in life, is all we have to hang onto in our times of sorrow. You and I both know that lesson. For me it has been a long hard road, but I am gaining everyday. You did a great job o this one!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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