sun-dried wash is in
clothes pegs left on empty lines
perch like coloured birds
A contest entry
- 'ku 'ku cachoo --enter your haiku here :) by sailor ptolema.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 78 entries
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I like this. I like that L2 can be used as a pivot, so the haiku can be read two ways. I like this summery 'ku, and the idea of clean laundry, and clothes pins as birds
. Makes me think of a calm day.
thanks for entering and g'luck
-sailor ptolema
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Nice work.
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Thankyou for reading and commenting, and for your very generous applause.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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Bravo!
Very nice!
Simple, great imagery, capturing a moment! Very well done!
I'd give you three applause but, alas, I'm broke!
Excellent!
Best,
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The fact that you have read and commented is sufficient applause. But thankyou for the intention.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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Nicely done. Can practically see those colored plastic clothespins my mom used to use.
Good luck!
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Thankyou for reading and commenting and for your kind applause.
Best wishes from 'down-under'.
Shenton
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This is such an awesome thought! I totally agree. I always felt that the pegs look like birds!! though its not sunny where I stand, at all
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