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Roses

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I would like to smell you-hu-hu-hu

what do you think about my poem?

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  • SilverWolf
    July 29, 2008
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    great!
    short.
    but awesome!
    Welcome to AP!

  • Eternal Cascade
    July 28, 2008

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    LOL!!!

    i don't think its as bad as it could have been if what you say is true!!

    i think the best thing you can do is spend a while reading some poetry, find a style you like and then have another go!!

    JJ x

  • chasingtheday gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    I would like to shed
    These tears for you.

    well you asked lol don't think poems have to rhyme though, some can be flowing along with ease with rhyme or joking poems.

  • pLuMmz
    July 27, 2008
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    Could someone please help me write a better poem please? Interested in this stuff but I can't write poems to save myself lol.
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