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[Haiku] December


sudden chill—

through the door    _slips_
winter’s wind


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  • sailor ptolema
    August 3, 2008
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    Oh, brrrr. I got a chill reading this, but maybe it's because my AC is on . Winter winds have a way of slipping through even the most insulated of doors & windows

    Still, a well written haiku. I love the way you experiment with syntax.

    thanks for entering & g'luck.

    -sailor ptolema

  • Rowan gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    Brrr. Hard to think of winter right now, but you did it.
    Now I'm cold. lol.
    Excellent haiku, hon.