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Washing Day

Summer breeze
Washing escapes
Cat in a hat

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  • sailor ptolema
    August 3, 2008
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    Summer breeze
    Washing escapes
    Cat in a hat
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    maybe:

    summer breeze
    washing escapes
    the cat in a hat

    ...I think it reads better with the definite article included in L3.

    I like this a lot. Cats definitely do not like to be given a bath .
    A nice little 'ku.

    thanks for entering and g'luck.

    -sailor ptolema