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Hai Ku


Hai ku you can too
It’s not about me and you
Can’t we just be friends

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  • sailor ptolema
    August 3, 2008

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    a very interesting take . I like the question in L3 . It would be so nice if it were that easy .

    thanks for entering and g'luck

    -sailor ptolema


  • rbruce gold member
    July 31, 2008
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    Most certainly we can just be friends. Haiku with a question. Like Pania's contest. Very Good.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    Unlike any haiku I've seen before! hehe

    Very cute


  • Fourthaxis
    July 28, 2008
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    LMAO, that's certainly an inventive way of putting it! Nice one!!
    I don't see why not!!

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