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grooming
the cat licks
my toes too
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A contest entry
- 'ku 'ku cachoo --enter your haiku here :) by sailor ptolema.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 78 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awwwwwwwwwww, this is really sweet. you probably should have won a trophy, because this is pretty good. -slick99
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LOL... Yeah... they ripped me off! hahaaa They're afraid for me to win... cuz then everyone says I win cuz I'm the Adv. Haiku teacher... so I hardly enter... just had to have some fun though.... thanks for your comment.
Either that... or this haiku actually sucks and I don't know it. hahaahaaa
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Ha-ha, like it. I can just feel its tongue.
P.S. Glad to see you back!
marlene
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Oh, I thoroughly enjoyed this. Cats are always trying to groom things
A very nice ordinary moment that you have captured in such a way that draws up many questions. I think of a person who is very weary, and of the cat trying to ease that.
thanks for entering and g'luck
-sailor ptolema
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Very nice! It (in a good way!) Seemed upside down! It makes me think more of a licking motion. Of course, I'm probably dwelling too much on it!
Best,
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I liked this. I used to have a cat that you'd think feet were his favorite food.
Cats are freaks.. and this haiku is pretty darn good.
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So good to see you back with licked foot and all
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LOLLL
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LMAO, this was too good!! I could actually feel a tickling sensation in my toes Very sweet!
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hahahahaaa... thanks for commenting!
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A cool moment you've captured here Don. Very nice. I like it when cats do that. The tongue is like Velcro no?
Paul
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Hi Paul... thanks!
And absolutely! Velcro!!! lol
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I like this haiku which includes my favorite of pets with all their idiocincrisies (sic)
my cats used to do that too. I miss those moments.
It's good to see you posting again, Don
Good luck in the dontest
Dee
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LOL....
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