I listen to you
you listen to me
together nothing said
Author notes
haiku inspired
A contest entry
- 'ku 'ku cachoo --enter your haiku here :) by sailor ptolema.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 78 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh I like this modern 'ku, the unspoken thoughts. Sometimes, listening to the silence says it all
. Thanks for entering and g'luck.
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sad...talking to each other's deaf ears...Great piece.
~mandie~
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Thank you for your time in reading and commenting. i'm glad you enjoyed.
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Telepathic!
Ahh yes that unspoken but spoken word, telepathic, animal insinct, reading facial expressions and body language, all of these concepts you have so very cleverly expressed in these few simple but powerful words, that is soo soo clever, it takes real serious talent to say so much in so few words, in which case and in this case they are well chosen and well used graphically expressed descriptives, you are amazing and with a phenomenal talent, no wonder you are in print, your works is excellent and such a joy to read too. Bravo, love it, very well done! You are a credit to poetry.
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Thank you for such a detailed and wonderful comment. I'm so glad that you found enjoyment in such a short read. Many thanks for your continued support.
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I'm not sure how to comment on this form, as I don't really know it too well..but it sure looks good to me hehe Good luck my friend.
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Thanks it is only about the third one I've done
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