sun shower-
I play hopscotch
with it's _puddles_
In a list
A contest entry
- 'ku 'ku cachoo --enter your haiku here :) by sailor ptolema.
1050 points, ended August 4, 2008, 78 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautifully crafted.

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Nice. I think of my childhood. I loved hopscotch
Warm, summer showers were so fun to be out in. Love your syntax usage .
thanks for entering and g'luck.
-sailor ptolema -
very nice
ku, it brings back memories
thank you for sharing good luck
Lin




