Stick voodoo dolls with
Needles endorsed with triste
To convey secret desires
Of reigning pain upon innocent souls.
Can they hear shushed calls
Whispered under short breaths
To warn them of horrors they've yet to
Be subjected to?
Crying for their freedom,
These gentle creatures rest
Fragile thoughts of crystal air;
And save them for victims
Which they have contributed to.
Such sweet faces upon woven puppets...
Author notes
1. Love
2. Hate
3. It
4. The
5. Or
6. I
7. You
8. Are
9. Death
10. Life
11. Super
12. Protect
13. Circumvent
14. Sex
15. Girl
16. Boy
17. Twilight
18. Night
19. Day
20. Ridiculous
words I couldn't use^
Yeah I don't know lol It's about voodoo dolls. >.>
*shrugs*
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Comments
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Great entry - thanks and best of luck.
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A nicely penned short poem. The theme was good, but lacked a bit of darkness.
Best of luck -
Nice poem, but in the last 8 hours I've gotten two complaints on number of lines. I'm sorry Lily but even if I add a blank line at the top and bottom and count them, there still isn't enough lines. Thanks for trying and better luck next time.
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