This world has bruised and broken me, and my bleeding shallow heart can't feel a thing.
Their lies which bound me still, have become engraved upon my heart as they impose their will.
All the warmth of Love is gone, and this emptiness and fear have left me numb.
Despite everything you think of me,there are faults inside I don't want you to see.
I long for a heart that can endure the pain when I manage to fail you again.
Just show me the way so that I may follow in spite of my fears and doubts within.
This is my end, this is where I lose it all. I realize now that I can no longer hide from you all my faults.
The farther that i wander from here just reminds me of all the times I've stumbled in my fear.
I wait for the end knowing there is nothing I can do.
Your loves moves in and removes all the things in me that aren't of you.
Author notes
8) sorrow
and yeah this is a prewrite i just didnt know how to add any AN without entering a "new" one.
sorry
A contest entry
- Your Words Were Bullets And I Was Target Practice by EvenStarsBreak--x.
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very nice
but as i said in the rules
it MUST rhyme
ill give you a break on this one
good job and good luck!
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Just like I feel
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wonderful write. =] Nicely written, you have a very nice way of wording things. great job. thank you for the entry.
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