i know that
i love you
i really really do
i grasp for ways
to show you
should i use the sledge
or perhaps the axe
or maybe just some little
slices with a big knife
here and there
wait the chain saw
yes thats it
for i so want your thighs
roasted for dinner tonight
you always said you
would provide for me
the motor will
awaken you of course
then you can count the
droplets of blood
as they fly around
ahhhhhh thats better
the saw ripping through
your flesh
thank you darling
i really really love you
Author notes
Hot roast for dinner tonight.
Well, tell me about what you think.
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OK
that was interesting, wishing I was the one you
love ha ha . Whatever floats.
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Strange but i have a sick sense of humor to .Well written made me cringe
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You are a sick and twisted person that should probably be sitting in a padded cell somewhere...Having said that, I love you poetry. Dark, creepy, scary even. lol. But seriously, you have some good stuff in that f-ed up mind of yours.
keep writing and thanks for sharing!
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haha! you truely are an amazing writer.
i don't know if it's because i have a sick since of humor or what but i love your writings. -
Haha i love your author notes that you put with this poem. It made me laugh. Anyways good poem. I love the detailes.
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Wow. This is either the most interesting thing I've ever read, or the creepiest. But overall it's quite a good write. The idea is a little off though :-P lol
Good job though :]
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How Cannibalistic
You truly wrote this with a lot of weird gore and vile wicked thoughts...sort of intoxicating like watching a movie or reading a horror story-book.......
novy
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WOW, that's all I can say. Very nice.
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