Well now let me see
What shall we write about
Cannot use certain words
But, we can sing and shout
Being a little lass
And being a little lad
Can't we just be friends
That would make me glad
Seems to be getting dark
Soon we will see our bed time
Let's us sing and shout
This lovely little rhyme
Tomorrow is another new light
When we can play again
Maybe we can use more words
That will bring us closer friend
A contest entry
- Reverse Word Bank by Loki.
1500 points, ended August 3, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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nice rant...i like it. the sing song rhythm of the write is sweet.
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It sounds like these little friends were playing all day and having a grand time but it beganto get dark so they had to go home and get ready for bed. I remember doing that a lot when I was littler. Great job!
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Technical foul on "You're" for being a conjunction of words 7 and 8. But I suppose I'll let it slide since I didn't oppose conjunctions in my rules.
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I changed it as I replace I'm and nitety-nite and now you're.
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Dearest Katie,
I didn't mean you had to change it. I rather liked it actually. But either way I appreciate it and wish you much luck.
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