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tid bits and other lies they told me

 

 

they stand on the corner

neon tinted hair and coffee-stained eyes

jittering to music heard in heads

damaged by ego, greed and bullshit

damaged by hands that hammer

words that clamour

afflicted and addicted to the noise

 

it's everywhere

blasting from stereos

heard from ghettoes

tentacles reaching the brain

through the ears

be this ... buy that

disembodied voices telling us

where it's at

 

buyer beware

the noise becomes our everyday

manipulating truth

telling us the way to live

the way to love

and all the other shit

that ain't worth shit

when you think a bit

 

what are we giving up?

our souls

our grace ...?

the corporate monster has no face

it only voices commands

while creating demands

 

they stand on the corner

surrounded by capitalism and corporate control

bleary-eyed and exhausted from want

embittered by delusions

of consumer deprivation

 

static electricity impulses the city

the background hums

machinations working the spirit

into binary awareness

punctuated with dollar signs

and symbolic wealth

 

in reality

economic heavyweights are

busily buying up tropical islands

in order to escape

the litterbox stench

of North American decay

 

don't worry people

(they say)

wear a happy face and invest in the future

freedom 55 is a carrot

(albeit a limp one)

dangling in our face

 

they stand on the corner

thumbs in pockets

plugged in

turned on

yearning for a bite

of the better life

oblivious to maggots

wriggling insidiously within the carrot

so fetid and embittered

is their want

 

 

 

 

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  • Malabu
    August 11, 2008

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    you have some great lines here...though a bit long i kept reading...couldnt help myself...loved the poem too
    great job
    mal


  • onerios13
    August 11, 2008

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    Powerful stuff...and with a voice that truly emulates buk and his pen.

    Deeply enjoyed this one.


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    July 29, 2008
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    good stuff

    and good luck in the contest


  • secberm
    July 27, 2008

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    Well done, sis. Love the content (LOVED IT!). Enjoyed the internal rhyme and the rhythm. Truly nice. Write on.

    Dez

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