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Idiotic Mistake~

I deserve all the repercussions of my decision
Not realizing how much I had lost
Over a idiotic bet with no bases
I have been branded with a lack of trust

The scar this decision left inside of my mind
Also depleted the essence of my love
For it severed a vein to my bruised heart
I felt the wrath from the Angel above

My bed burns like the fires from hell
I can sense from everybody I walk past
Can read through my flesh like a worn out book
And felt strongly they wanted to kick my ass

When I close my eyes to dream
I see the event play over again
I am the actor in this horror movie
The stupidity of the crime committed

The pressure that was put on me
Like a tire full of wasted air
The love for one so beautiful in my heart
Now I only have the engagement ring to bear

Author notes

Damn~....I still have the ring...Need a finger to put it on #10Choice....
Written January 9th, 2004

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  • echomywurdz
    January 10, 2004
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    Aww thats sad but hard times inspire us to write great things and anyways nice job


  • vampira1665 silver member
    January 9, 2004
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    Beautiful/sad

    STOP, this is so sad and don't beat your self up about it anymore. My favorite saying is: If it is to be, it will be. Hugs and bites, Kittie