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Love Bleeds


The tide rushes in,
to wash away today,
and all the prints I have laid,
on my foraging way.

In a blink of the eye,
the facts all disappear,
revealing all the truths of the sea,
and it all becomes so clear.

Love bleeds into oceans,
just to dissipate into blue,
and my loving thoughts are washed away,
in the rolling waves of wanting you.



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"Crimson Tides Bleed"

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    A beautiful heart felt poem.
    Especially the last stanza.
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes to you
    Julie


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    this is a wonderful take on the prompt, lovely write and good luck
    take care Stephanie ♥


  • maralisa silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    a beautifully deep take on the promt with some great imagery Love bleeds into oceans,just to dissipate into blue,and my loving thoughts are washed away,in the rolling waves of wanting you.good luck in the contest