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Gnossiennes for Jesus!

No composer can compose
Anything worth listening to
Unless JESUS is in his soul
And he must sing a song
For our Lord Jesus
On that cross of wood
In Israeli-occupied Palestine
So Erik Satie will rot in Hell
And all the devils will
Shove red-hot gnossiennes
Up his faggot arsehole
Which won't be a great deal
Of fun.

          

 

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  • The Otep
    September 30, 2008
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    The beginning of the poem is amazing


  • nansie
    August 13, 2008
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    When I think of our Great King Jesus Christ, I read my Bible and relate to the most wonderful human that ever lived, who died for us that we may be saved from death.
    Wages of Sin is death, so by dying we have paid for our sin. His message was that we must Love one another
    and forgive one another. I find your poem starts off well, I think! enough said.


  • fanny-f-tea
    July 30, 2008
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    I lika I lika a lot


  • no win no fee
    July 28, 2008
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    he he he. This is a corker. good luck Pastor and may the Lord be with you. xx


  • Keith
    July 27, 2008

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    Oh dearie, dearie me, ma grannie caught a flea
    We saltit it, and peppert it, and ett it for wir tea
    Wee Erik wisnae there, he'd kindae had his share
    But doon in Hell, he wisnae well

    And really didnae care....

    Well done.

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