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Love's Instability

Oceans breathe deep
As life streaks down
angel's face...The tide
sings of a bleeding heart..

Stars fall as hollow
whispers haunt spirit's
joy, shadows hold
unalienable horizons.


Kissing innocent
dreams as they float
through liquefied
corrosion..Watching

feet slide through

muck, created

by loves unchanging

instability

 

Author notes

10 Poets to write from any of these quotes
" Crimson tides bleed " by me.
" Tomorrow is a forgotten secret " by me.
" Shallow becomes the deep " by me

I'm using all three..Lol. And my muse is icky so sorry!! lol.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    Beautiful
    All three were so well penned
    Instability as its best
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    oh wow this is so beautifully put together the way you used all the prompts are amazing. well done and best of luck hun


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 28, 2008

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    awww you did wonderfully putting the prompts together *hugs*
    good luck in the contest and take care
    Stephanie ♥


  • maralisa silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    wow a wonderful take on the promt very deep and meaningful Stars fall as hollow whispers haunt spirit'sKissing innocent dreams as they float through liquefied corrosion.good luck in the contest


  • Lady Australis silver member
    July 28, 2008
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    your an amazeibg writer flower angel i love you


  • Cannonsfire
    July 27, 2008
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    Still sings sissy even if you say it sucks!

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