lizard captures warmth
on sun-splashed granite rock
hawk enjoys fresh meal
A contest entry
- Haiku's Here! by Age of Rain.
750 points, ended August 15, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Smile... all the while...
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Interesting work, excellent use of the traditional form.
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Poor lizard- it was just relaxing and innocent at that!
Anyway, I love the lizard's last moment and all, as well with the unexpected ending
Great haiku, all right! -
ohhhh poor lizard
but well written -
I love it.. well done!
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Ewwwww. That poor lizzard but that is the food chain for you. Good haiku here goodluck in hte contest best wishes and much luck
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a good piece that swerves the spirit into new ideas where the light of the life is constant and true - we all have to find our daily bread or meat in this case with the hawk. salt and pepper sir/madame hawk lol
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Bravo well done
This was wonderful truely enjoying and the first Haiku that I've understood thanks Boog
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