Her hands were bound with his silk tie,
High above her head.
Her legs seperated,anchored at the ankles,
Spread eagle on the bed.
The sheets rumpled and askew,
Her body,pliant and moist with sweat.
Such delightful helplessness in tabboo hungers,
She would not likely soon forget.
Her eyes were covered,
So that she could not see.
But she felt him there,as he shifted ever so slightly,
A phantom on bended knee.
Her stomach quivered,
Nerves played hopscotch across glistening skin...
"Pleasure me my darling,"she whispered,
"Ravage me again and again."
A lit candle he held burning,
Just above her chest.
Slowly the melting wax slipped away,
Stinging sensations covered the nipples of her breast.
Arching her back as much as the restraints would allow,
From the bed she slowly rose.
While sparkles of light burst within her eyes,
Electrifying her from head to toes.
His head she could now feel brushing her thighs,
And she was taken from shore to shore,
With ice cube in mouth he taunted her,
Then lavishingly began to explore.
Mixing with her heated sex,
All manner of thoughts began to erupt...
The joys proved so enticing,
The fond fulfillments,so many claimed corrupt.
His tongue...oh so heavenly,
Flickered to and fro.
Her mind froze in ecstasy,
Until now,she did never know.
Tremors now wracked her body,
As though they would never cease...
She cried out for satisfaction,
She cried out for release!
He plunged deep inside of her,
His manhood jackhammering the answer to her request.
Every part of her with a mind of it's own now,
She felt her heart,a beating drum,swell within her chest.
"How could one not know,"she wondered,
"How could one feel desecrated?"
Orgasmic explosions left her lying physically spent,
And her sexual desires,now gratefully satiated.
But here it was not over.
Indeed,this is where she would begin,
To explore every manner of freedom...
Those only found...in carnal sin.
A contest entry
- Touch me with your words. by Ho74pp1eP1e.
525 points, ended September 2, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MEN ONLY, TURN ME ON! PW's Take me on a fantasy date. PWs 820 Pts by broken spirits.
700 points, ended September 4, 2008, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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kinky...
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Not so kinky...more...adventurous...willing...lustfully passionate
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well now... don't we know just exactly what we want..
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Well earned gold
Congrats.
Buddy
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Candle wax..
kinky.. yet another side of you..
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GREAT BIG BIG SMILE
Hello, this was wowowonderfullllllY done,
thank you. This was a date and a half. I'm not so sure about the hot wax, [ouch] but the rest was pure joy. rissa
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What a pleasure!!!
This is just what I am looking for.
It is so good to read, it is tasteful, but kinky.
The detail just enough to make you want more, or make your own. Well done. Thank you for this entry!
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What a sexual splender
to read
my dear friend you have a way with words!
this was so intense
what pleasure you must have in writing such an erotic and intimate poem
thanks for telline me i might like it
I absolutely LOVED it
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Sexual energy here
I find it hard at the moment to write such erotic poetry as yours, mainly concentrating on dark writes. You do it well and your poem has erotica written all over it. Indeed carnal sin can be a good thing.
While I'm here, thank you for your comment on "This is totally awesome shit", Zappa is cool!
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