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Emo Child

You call me emo like it's a bad thing
You ridicule me and make me cry
But I will get the last laugh
When I become more than
You ever were

She's just different
But she's still beautiful
She may be emo and she may get sad
Those are the reasons we love her

You call me emo
You laugh at
Those things which
You just don't understand

Author notes

12) http://media.photobucket.com/image/emo/sisirocks123/emo.jpg?
A dedication to a very wonderful 15 year old little girl. Her name is Jennifer. i added some more onto this.

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  • Horcrux.Breathing
    March 31

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    This is a very powerfull write with strong words
    you have managed to show so much emotion in very few words its wonderfull


  • BlindingSchism
    September 17, 2008

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    I think it speaks volumes for something so short. I hate how people judge other people based on the outside of a person. If the person only knew how much hurt the other pehaps suffers, or how beautiful the person really is inside, they'd change their opinion.

    Over thinking, over analyzing separates the body from the mind,
    Withering my intuition, leaving opportunities behind.
    Feed my will to feel this moment, urging me to cross the line.
    Reaching out to embrace the random,
    Reaching out to embrace whatever may come.

    More people need to listen to Tool and open their third eye, lol.


  • Melissa Burns
    August 14, 2008

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    This is an interesting poem, everyone should step outside of their own ideals and judge people for who they are, not their lables


  • cutting the pain
    August 9, 2008

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    Awesome.
    People seem to think that Emo is a bad thing and they just try to make us feel worse but we are people too..


  • Brokentruth93
    July 29, 2008

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    wow... that is all i have to say... that works sooooo well with the picture.. and that makes me want to go hug my mom... the last stanza is something like she would say to me... thank you for entering my contest

    ~~Jessica Noelle

  • MightyBoosh
    July 28, 2008

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    I do like it, i think its lovely, very simple and very sweet.

    I like that it doesnt rhyme, it kinda makes it more into a story.
    Well done
    xx

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