I should have been his chocolate woman
but he underestimated me and all my
carnal glory because monogamy is
the enemy of man.
I would have fed him with liquids
he could have lived off of, leaving
sweet smelling scents on sensitive
nose hairs and eyelashes
so that when he blinked or inhaled
he would be forced to think of me
and no one else.
He could have been satisfied with a
willingness and hungriness that a
starving woman has to offer who
only wants a stroke and honesty
in exchange for a journey
between her thighs and her mind.
Is it too much?
Am I not enough?
When you taste me forcefully
do you magically become
infested with love?
But when you leave all thoughts
of me whisk out of my
apartment with a simple
shove?
I'll wait
but close the door to
my bedroom while you try to
contemplate.
Author notes
Mm...just...thinking...
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"because monogamy is
the enemy of man."
There are some out there that sure make it seem as such.
"I would have fed him with liquids
he could have lived off of, leaving
sweet smelling scents on sensitive
nose hairs and eyelashes
so that when he blinked or inhaled
he would be forced to think of me
and no one else."
The sensual senses shared here is one of those nod-your-head moments. Sweet, and languishing.
Baby girl! I know what you're thinking and he probably wishes he knew too... To think of what he missed...okay, enough said, more than enough.
You are definately a triple threat! Act, dance, and write, whydontya!
Have a Blessed Christmas and Love-filled New Year ♥
Renee
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missed my applause
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thinking...
you should have been right : he could have been stupid : and the lines that fell behind : would have been good : i think i do not care : for those that did fall behind were just as refreshing : a sordid sassiness : lying on bed : reflecting : reciting : still at peace : not heartbroken : but cooool : if i had to coin a phrase that described it : "you owned him" : isn't that what everyone calls it now'days? : "close the door to my bedroom..." : oh : that was just raw to the bone marrow
wrappedinwickedme!
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Wow. Say it sis. He could have had it all in you but was too surface minded to see it. I absolutely loved this~!
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great goodness!
The setup to this peace is unreal! the verse rewritten by the commenter echoes my thoughts also, but man did you change the tone towards the end. still an amazing write, your talent is limitless!
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'I would have fed him with liquids
he could have lived off of, leaving
sweet smelling scents on sensitive
nose hairs and eyelashes
so that when he blinked or inhaled
he would be forced to think of me
and no one else.'
Oh my god. So erotic. So sexy. So passionate. I need a chold shower for that verse. However, the rest does seem sad and melancholy, which I don't think you deserve to feel if I may say so.
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This is a curious piece and I wonder what you were 'thinking' about.
Pretty nice start (I like lots.) Write on, sweets. One.
Dez
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