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Liar

Darkness leers behind every corner
Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide
Mud and sand pulls you down
Created by all the time you spend
LYING

Looking in a mirror
Not liking yourself
Who's fault is that?
The monster's on your shelf
LIES

Liar liar
I know who you are
I know where you live
It's not very far
MY MIND

Honey, please
Don't waste those tears on me
I love to drink them down
Darling, please
Don't scream and plead
I love to see you drown

Liar liar
What's on you're mind
Thou shalt not lie
Thou shalt not lie




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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 21, 2008

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    A touching story you have retold by a wonderful and heartfelt write....I love it..and thanks for sharing it...


  • MrsShadows
    August 2, 2008
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    greatness

    this is awesome.so true.


  • xxUnSpokenxx
    July 28, 2008
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    This was realy good, Very well written.
    Keep up the good writing ^_^