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Station Stories


Four minutes is a long time
when you're on a platform,
waiting to plunge.

He left before I could scream
"This is wrong!
Come with me!
I need these worde to spill
before I CHOKE!"...

Darkness trembled on the horizon:
I should have known it as a sign.

I left, alone,
with my hurt pinned neatly to my sleeve.




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  • Abby Eyeball
    July 27, 2008

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    isn't it just like that...

    this piece makes me wonder what the other person thinks is so much better by leaving to whatever is waiting in that direction...