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Marc the Back

He came back.
What a pity.
How are we going to survive
With him all willy nilly?

I used to love him.
Now that's gone.
I love another.
Is that so wrong?

He tortures his sister.
Calling her sweetie.
I wonder if they
Slipped him the drugs in his drink.

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Welcome back Marc lol

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  • Dancing Feather gold member
    July 27, 2008
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    I torture everyone and wtf is with you - Marc


    Lol, funny but the last stanza needs a little work - Kayla


    • BastMoon
      October 19, 2008
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      Nothing is with me and you don't torture me.

      Bite me Kayla I couldn't find anything to work with "Sweetie".