When I watched you with her
A small piece of me breaks off
When your lips meet hers
The tears flow..but only on the inside
I'd torture myself to listen to you talk about her
Bleed on the inside just so we could be near
Ignore every boy...
Just to hear you say 'hi'
Often I wished it was my hand in yours
Can't you see they fit perfectly?
Can't you see the tears are real?
And the smiles are fake?!
My heart always protected me from you
But it always got damage
Though it always hid its pain
I can feel it..bleeding oh so much
You said you loved me...
'That's why your my best friend'
You held my heart..
But watched it break
You've thought me something...
While killing me in the process
Though my heart may be broken
I can still love with all the little pieces
Author notes
"Though my heart may be broken, i can still love with all the little pieces"
A contest entry
- Prompt contest by Brokentruth93.
300 points, ended August 13, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Aww how deeply emotional & heart-breaking this is.
The feelings expressed here I have felt, and can easily relate to. The last stanza really tugged at my heart with,
"Though my heart may be broken
I can still love with all the little pieces"
--That was so beautiful. Loved it.
Great write!
Thanks for entering & best of luck
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I love this!
I can really feel your pain.
This is a great poem
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This is what im going through at the moment.
Seriously, this really hit home with me, thought it was brilliant.
xxx
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wow, i love it! i know how that is... i loved someone that loved someone else and they only thought of you as friends. and i was the one that was loved and i only loved him as a friend, or a brother. great! and works well with the prompt!! thank you for the entry!!!
~~Jessica Noelle
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