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[ I cant stand this ]

I cant stand this
Why am i so confused
I cry in this light
that i see before my eyes
I feel so much rage right now
But yet im so sad

I sit in my chair
as i write this poem
            /me sigh

I feel so sick inside
why do i think these things
why must i feel this way
I cant answer my own questions
but yet i answer others
and help them with their problems
I wanna help myself as well
But i can't

So i scream and yell
in my room filled with scars
I just want everything to go away

I hate it when people tell me
whats true about myself
and when i am wrong
It really angers me
and makes me very unsatisfied

Life is truly a waste of time
It greatly depresses me in my own time
I just want to leave
Is there something better than this life?

I really hate this

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  • John Timothy Bailer
    July 28, 2008
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    thats some heavy shit young one. it saddens me that you feel so badly. if you ewanna talk im here!

  • Sound of Madness
    July 28, 2008

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    I use to be able to relate to this. I mean, this poem describes my life in January perfectly. I was a hypocrite and the saying I associated with my life was, "How can I help others if I can't even help myself?" I seemed to do a good job with giving others advice, but I couldn't follow it myself. Fantastic work, you've brought back alot of memories.

  • NightSeeker
    July 28, 2008
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    nnice

    i agree with u i love this poem nice job

  • Boxingboy
    July 28, 2008

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    wow great and awsome , fantastic poem

    it's awsome

    and i don't know maybe there are some things better in another life then now but we live now so might as well live now and get ready for the other life that we will live

    heck yeah will die eventually but if you have your boy by yourside you may never want to die

    well sorry for preaching well if i did can't tell to tired to think right now

    well hope your doin good love ya sis


  • Dead and Breathing
    July 28, 2008

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    great write

    I know exactly where you're coming from with this. I wish I knew what sparked this write, but I think it's great.

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