Dancing on my bed hair brush
in hand. Shaking head & moving
my hips.
Blasting the speakers to your
ears bleed and non-stop jumping
till your heart stopped.
Melodious vibrations calmly send
my body to that special cloud in
the sky, where nothing but electric
guitars play and violins screech their
hearts out.
Heavy bassing, and speedy techno plays
as i slowly but surely dance out of my
pants.
When the music stops, i freeze and my heart
crumbles in two...silence sends chills up my
spine...
I fall from my musical high in the sky
and land back where i started...
In that polka-dotted room with hairbrush in
hand.
Author notes
well well, this is actually about my first non-human love which is music..because i'm a music junkie
Dani♥ hehehe woooo
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Comments
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This is a very fun write. ^_^ It reminds me of that movie Sleepover. haha
"Melodious vibrations calmly send
my body to that special cloud in
the sky, where nothing but electric
guitars play and violins screech their
hearts out."
I like your description here.
I like the instruments you chose as well. 
Great write. Thanks for entering.
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thankies for the comment ^_^ music is my first and last love...so it always deserves a poem
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I am also a big music fan, so this hits a spot for me, sometimes you can just get lost in a rhythm or lyric that is for sure, penned with a wonderful thought at heart. Best to you
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i can connest with this one!!! I too love my music!!!
best of luck
--kat -
I adore music as well, it's so fun and you can let yourself loose in it and be something your not. That's why I also like drama. You take yourself away from the world and find your mind telling a story to the song. Or is that just me?
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When the music stops, i freeze and my heart
crumbles in two...silence sends chills up my
spine...
I fall from my musical high in the sky
very unique subject and very nice write
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lol, this is a good poem
i like the imagery and metaphors and the wording is great
thank you for your entry!
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I love how you describe how music makes you feel. Uplifting and wonderful, isn't it?
Nicely written and composed.
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Good luck babe.
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Hello fellow music lover. I so remember the 'hair brush' days of singing and dance around my bedroom. You invoked good memories for me with this. Thanks for entering. Good luck!
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wow lol I LOVE this, it makes me feel so happy, and music is also my first non-human love lol
luv it
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