my tears on my cheeks they fall
full of passion flow with life
but takes no form at all
like that rolled down
on Jesus cheeks
during his downfall
full of sorrows and energy
tonight my heart feels pain no more
my agonies relieved, from my heart
your love I let go of, and no remorse
but my heart still feel the pain
that I thought I would let go of
and not feel it ever, not again
may be because you still in my heart
like shining star at night, never fades
you brought down my tears
that stained my face
In a list
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This was so sad but at the same time written beautifully from your heart. If you did not feel pain you would have no heart ..aw but you do!
If true i hope she reads it, if not you did well in penning a great verse!
Hugs
~Lisa~
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Thank you
Thank you my dear friend for your comment, so where have you been hiding, anywasy
for the contest, you can write me that one you were talking about, I would love to see that, well hope you enter, and yes you still have six days to go, lol well comeone in check it out and give me your best
****Hugs****
thelegend
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